Directions: First, copy and paste the sentences below onto your DOL page. Second, work with your DOL partner to correct the sentences.
DOL 25 Sentence 1:
the titanic carried more then 1,500 people to there graves it was believed to by unsinkable
The Titanic, believed to be unsinkable, carried more than 1,500 people to their graves.
Sentence 2:
the student teacher arrives next week it is necessary that we finishes reading eliots long poem the waste land
Because the student teacher arrives next week, it is necessary that we finish reading Eliot's long poem The Waste Land.
DOL 26 Sentence 1:
a renowned magazine many well known writers submit articles and stories to the atlantic monthly
Many well known writers submit articles and stories to the Atlantic Monthly, a renowned magazine.
Sentence 2:
i am very eager to read the french novel the plague carmen said but its not in our library
"I am very eager to read the French novel The Plague," Carmen said, "But it's not in our library."
DOL 27 Sentence 1:
everyone in this grade are responsible for this years dance therefore we all must raise funds for the decorations
Everyone in this grade is responsible for this year's dance; therefore, we all must raise funds for the decorations.
Sentence 2:
having worked for 8 hours i need to set down listen to music and the enjoyment of a good dinner
Having worked for eight hours, I need to sit down, listen to music, and enjoy a good dinner.
DOL 28 Sentence 1:
i remember when my neighbor he set up a huge telescope the larger i had ever seen to observe halleys comet
Sentence 2:
ms masayo asked do you feel alright now walter or dont you want to go skiing
DOL 29 Sentence 1:
when are these books due hans should i bringn them to the library
Sentence 2:
after the constitutional convention of 1787 drafted the constitution of the united states almost 3 years passed before it was ratified
Directions: First, copy and paste the sentences below onto your DOL page. Second, work with your DOL partner to correct the sentences.
DOL 25
Sentence 1:
the titanic carried more then 1,500 people to there graves it was believed to by unsinkable
The Titanic, believed to be unsinkable, carried more than 1,500 people to their graves.
Sentence 2:
the student teacher arrives next week it is necessary that we finishes reading eliots long poem the waste land
Because the student teacher arrives next week, it is necessary that we finish reading Eliot's long poem The Waste Land.
DOL 26
Sentence 1:
a renowned magazine many well known writers submit articles and stories to the atlantic monthly
Many well known writers submit articles and stories to the Atlantic Monthly, a renowned magazine.
Sentence 2:
i am very eager to read the french novel the plague carmen said but its not in our library
"I am very eager to read the French novel The Plague," Carmen said, "But it's not in our library."
DOL 27
Sentence 1:
everyone in this grade are responsible for this years dance therefore we all must raise funds for the decorations
Everyone in this grade is responsible for this year's dance; therefore, we all must raise funds for the decorations.
Sentence 2:
having worked for 8 hours i need to set down listen to music and the enjoyment of a good dinner
Having worked for eight hours, I need to sit down, listen to music, and enjoy a good dinner.
DOL 28
Sentence 1:
i remember when my neighbor he set up a huge telescope the larger i had ever seen to observe halleys comet
Sentence 2:
ms masayo asked do you feel alright now walter or dont you want to go skiing
DOL 29
Sentence 1:
when are these books due hans should i bringn them to the library
Sentence 2:
after the constitutional convention of 1787 drafted the constitution of the united states almost 3 years passed before it was ratified